Monday, September 27, 2010

Memorable Face

     Wistfully, she sits inside the cage, her petite face staring out through the small holes as people walk by. The black line that forms her mouth, curve down in sorrow. She whimpers at the sight of a child playing with another puppy. Her little black nose and almost invisible white whiskers twitch as she smells the different aromas of the outside world. There is a damp, dark brown tear stain under her left eye. Her eyes are filled with loneliness, desperation, and fear. Lonely because of the lack of socialization. Desperate for someone to come and take her home. Fear of another home like her last; full of abuse and starvation. Her ears go up with a fraction of hope as a small child walks by smiling at her. The face of that small, tan puppy will be forever remembered by that child. No one could forget such an adorable, desperate and memorable face.

-Sarah
Picture taken by me of a puppy, Crayon, at my local animal shelter :)

8 comments:

Andrea said...

Nice, Sarah. You've captured the assignment beautifully. As a reader I love it; as a teacher I need to point out that you had a verb tense transition from past to present and then back to past. Stay consistent. Seriously well done!

Unknown said...

The puppy is so cute:)

Cassie Tanna said...

i really like this! great job!

Zach said...

Enjoyed reading it!!

Anonymous said...

Sarah your style is fun and playful. Love the puppy.

Sarah said...

Thanks you guys!!

Mrs. Andrea - Yeah I tried so hard not to do that!! I'll fix it :)

Wes said...

I really really like this! Awesome!

Sarah said...

Thank yous!! :D

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